Review My first Techno Song!

[monkeyturd]

Me and a friend created this techno song . We call it "Secret Robot Cowboy". Keep in mind that this is the first techno song weve ever created. Tell me what u think


"Secret Robot Cowboy"

http://www.adamgarst.com/SecretRobotCowboy.mp3


UPDATE: New Song has been created.

Johann Minshew & Adam Garst are proud to present the epic tale of laz0r beams of different Millenia whose struggle is sure to destroy the Univ0rce...

"Laz0r Battle X000"
(pronounced X-Thousand)

http://www.adamgarst.com/laz0rbattlex000.mp3

[PmS]

Hey NICE especially for a first song created :)

[Canuck]

Techno get's SO repetitive! Sounds good though for your first song, although techno doesn't really take much time to put together. What u using, fruity loops?

[monkeyturd]

Techno get's SO repetitive! Sounds good though for your first song, although techno doesn't really take much time to put together. What u using, fruity loops?
i used fruity loops. And we actually tried to not make this song repetitive. This song has 5 different parts. the first 2 parts are repeated at the end, but other than that it shouldnt be repetitive.

[Canuck]

Still repetitive if you ask me. Also this should prolly only be in off topic and not double posted.

[WoRmX]

try using propellerhead reason 2.5. I use it all the time to make mah hiphop beats.

Its way better then fruity loops pre-sampled crap. In reason 2.5 u can sample ur own shit. From beats to piano/guitar/strings/baselines ect ect...

fruityloops is pretty ghay imo

[Virtuosofriend]

Moved to music forum --->

[Arclyte]

nice job, from around 2:20 very prodigy(esque),

can someone gimme a link for the reason program, i can only find trial crap even on the torrent sites,

it would help me out a lot, i need something for my GCSE composition,
and trying to use ejays sound lab as an advanced sound base program jus doesnt quite work.

[Canuck]

can someone gimme a link for the reason program, i can only find trial crap even on the torrent sites

You can get the trial here: http://www.propellerheads.se/

Other then that mpc does not allow warez talk. Please read the rules (http://www.mpcforum.com/faq.php?faq=mpcrules_faq_item)

[Arclyte]

sry, my bad.
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cough can someone email the link mac_daddy_602@hotmail.com cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough*******

[Felix]

*cough* do you not read the rules? *cough* *cough*

[[MPC]UnKnOwN]

Techno get's SO repetitive! Sounds good though for your first song, although techno doesn't really take much time to put together. What u using, fruity loops?

what planet are you living on? professional house or industrial techno takes just as long to think up, sample, and record as a normal music album does. Just because it is electronika doesn't mean it's easy. Also...if you would expand your music knowledge horizon to maybe some trance stuff...you will discover that not all techno is repetitive.

[dpb h4x0r]

monkey do you mind of i use your song on my website? ill give you the credit and stuff
btw, thats one hell of a good song for you and your friend first song! :bunny: :cow:

[monkeyturd]

monkey do you mind of i use your song on my website? ill give you the credit and stuff
btw, thats one hell of a good song for your first one! :bunny: :cow:

DO IT !
Also if ur going to use it on ur site i have a streaming version here: www.adamgarst.com/SecretRobotCowboy.asf

And tell me what ur site is

[dpb h4x0r]

here it is: www.xanga.com/demon28


DANCE!!!!

nvm i got a link to download it
nice 2nd song

[monkeyturd]

Update with a new song. check top post

[Dark Endless]

very nice.

[Arclyte]

*cough* do you not read the rules? *cough* *cough*

no im rebelling, im an exception to the rules.....

stop arselicking admin, i jus want to know where i can find it.

[luck777jojo]

well if youre looking for anything more then a demo without paying for it it is against the MPC rules... you should be happy that your original post was not deleted and you were not banned, don't try to be a rebel here.... you won't be around long enough.
BTW don't disrespect mods.... that's not nice either.

[Arclyte]

I never said it wasnt agasint the rules, thats why i asked if someone could discuss it privately with me......

oh an btw, the rebelling part was being sarcastic....
now stop jackin this guys thread.

[[MPC]UnKnOwN]

you're the one jacking the thread my friend...


by the way...i really like the new song aswell mate. gg :p

[h34d1]

Yep they are nice :-)

[IHGS]

hey i can stop listening to that lol

[Sgt.Smack447]

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both r great

[stijneke]

hm i like both songs, think ill use them in my mixes... any copyrights needed? oh nevermind il pirate them >: ) hehehe

EDIT: o yea and listen to a part of one of my mixes on http://users.telenet.be/stijnvanbergen

[o({})o]

I like both songs :)

[importdrinker]

both songs are well done...
they seem a bit "all over the place" which isn't rare for first timers....they each have enough for 2-3 tracks, with some more work obviously....just my opinion....

the titles are a bit lost on me....it would be neat if u threw in some samples....maybe a clint eastwood josey wales voice clip in the first....maybe a dr. evil "fricken laser beam" clip in the second...and hey, how about some laser sound samples from star wars in the second and some whip cracks in the first...

dont take offense...just throwin out ideas....keep up the good work....

[the_x]

wow nice songs. thx

[f1r3d0g]

I like it
What program did you use?
And What Midi keyboard do u have?

[Mitsie]

Not bad for first tracks. They have good structure. I'd wack some eq on those hihats though or get a new sample. They are harsh!

[originalcon]

mokeyturd kick ass beats y0!. i got em on one of my mix tech cds. keep em coming , I can barely get my fruityloops to work

tarren598@hotmail.com

[ionix]

dont throw samples in the track there overrated

1st track is got a hard house feel to it
theres one to many synths going at one part but meh pretty good :D
id dance to it at a party haha

2nd has got a electro trance feel :D


great job on both tracks

highly recommend u mess around with reason 2.5 if u can do this on fruityloops :P


pm me if u want reason ;)

[hase]

nice workl alltogether - who knows, maybe one day you are going to sell your own CDs :D

[Riddik]

this song roxxorz lol 1:30 to 2:00 would be a good part for an action video or something

[thuannguyen]

great song

[ApeXX]

Not bad for a first release, but like others have said it is quite repetative, although you tried for it not to be. Also I think the beginning is a little choppy, I know it is supposed to sound like that but you could probably make it a little smoother. Overall, for a first one very good.

[sp0rkeh123]

holy shit man how the **** do you make techno music????
what kinda proggy is
"fruity loops"
and how much does it cost
or is it free? plz tell meh

[luck777jojo]

http://www.flstudio.com/

they have a demo which you can try and the cheapest version is like $50

[sp0rkeh123]

thank you bro